A Special Poetry Thursday: Happy Birthday Kristi
I know I post these things on wednesdays, but I am too busy on thursdays to do it. Give me a break ok? Besides, the fact I am doing it tonight gives me an opportunity to say happy birthday to a fellow cube head Kristi which leads into this weeks poem. I do not try to post my own poetry on this blog because I feel it is a tad self-indulgent since I pretty much write whatever I want on here and am already self-indulgent enough. But this is an exception. Several months ago I was talking to Kristi (who happens to be an incredible young woman) when I got inspired to write a poem. Here is a rough draft. I love the Gazal form. The short meditative lines. Each stanza being a seperate poem yet a part of the whole. It isn't titled yet and is still a work in progress. Here you go:
Known as the great mystery God is a wonder.
He understand the nature of dust, but does He ever wonder?
A child's eyes are purer than an adults.
The innoccent stare in wonder.
Man named the animals. God named teh stars. Man built
a tower to heaven. Who created the greater wonder?
If you make no promises except for trampled grass
then enjoy the possibility for another wonder.
But I stayed too long. I took my hat and coat,
sat on the front step. I lost my wonder.
Be kind, Kristi, while cooking with cinnamon.
The other spices are jealous of its wonder.
Happy B-day Kristi!
Known as the great mystery God is a wonder.
He understand the nature of dust, but does He ever wonder?
A child's eyes are purer than an adults.
The innoccent stare in wonder.
Man named the animals. God named teh stars. Man built
a tower to heaven. Who created the greater wonder?
If you make no promises except for trampled grass
then enjoy the possibility for another wonder.
But I stayed too long. I took my hat and coat,
sat on the front step. I lost my wonder.
Be kind, Kristi, while cooking with cinnamon.
The other spices are jealous of its wonder.
Happy B-day Kristi!
posted by Out Of Jersey | 7:12 PM
4 Comments:
Thank you... You are too sweet!
I really like your banner at the top of your blog. It is so beautiful how did you do it?
"A child's eyes are purer than an adults. The innoccent stare in wonder."
VERY nice. :-)
wes,
I am working on a post on this type of poetic style and will list the books I most often go back to.
Kristi,
You are welcome!
Cinnamon,
I got it from Eddo at Posted Note. It took him like 2 minutes.
Writer,
Thanks, I appreciate it.
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